自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có nhắc đến hai mục đích sử dụng xe đạp. Tuy nhiên, cần sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp: dùng “to go” thay vì “to went”, và tránh lặp “to hang”. Cụm “it ties me with a lot of memories” chưa tự nhiên; hãy dùng “it brings back a lot of childhood memories”. Có thể nói thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn bạn thường đạp xe đi đâu cùng bạn bè.

範例: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike to school and around my neighborhood with my friends. It brings back a lot of happy childhood memories.

建議: Bạn đã đưa ra quan điểm rõ ràng và nêu được lý do liên quan đến môi trường, nhưng câu trả lời bị ngắt ở cuối và có nhiều từ đệm, lặp từ. Sửa “people are now cycle” thành “people now cycle” hoặc “people are now cycling”; dùng “short commutes” ở dạng số nhiều. Hãy hoàn tất ý cuối bằng một lý do cụ thể và giữ câu trả lời gọn, mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short journeys. The government promotes cycling as an eco-friendly way to improve air quality. Also, bikes are convenient and inexpensive to use.

× Well, when I was a child, I used to have a bike to went to school and to hang to hang out with my friends.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I used to have a bike to go to school and hang out with my friends.

The infinitive marker to must be followed by the base form of a verb, so went should be go. The repeated to hang appears to be a speech repetition and can be removed for a grammatically clean sentence.

× I think it's, uh, ties me with a lot of memories in my childhood.

✓ I think it ties me to many memories from my childhood.

The phrase it's ties incorrectly combines it is with the main verb ties. Use it ties without is. Also, ties me to is the appropriate construction for expressing a connection.

× More people are now cycle for short commute.

✓ More people are now cycling for short commutes.

Commute is a countable noun, and the sentence refers to short commutes in general, so use the plural form commutes.

× More people are now cycle for short commute.

✓ More people are now cycling for short commutes.

After are in the present progressive tense, use the present participle form of the verb: cycling, not cycle.

× Many to choose to ride a bike because it.

✓ Many people choose to ride a bike.

The phrase many to choose does not contain a finite main verb. Use many people choose. The ending because it introduces an unfinished clause, so remove it unless you can complete the thought, for example, because it is convenient.