自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có nêu lý do, nhưng câu quá dài và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp: dùng “used to have” thay vì “used to has”, “when I grew up” thay vì “when I grow up”, và “it fits my body” thay vì “it’s fit with my bodies”. Cụm “because” bị lặp; hãy chia ý thành 2–3 câu và dùng từ tự nhiên hơn như “comfortable” hoặc “more practical”.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood, but now I usually travel by motorbike because it’s more practical and comfortable for me.

建議: Bạn có ý trả lời rằng xe đạp phổ biến ở Việt Nam và liên hệ với việc tập thể dục, nhưng câu hiện khó hiểu do ngập ngừng và nhiều cụm sai như “famous is my country”, “keep fish” và “help theirs improve”. Hãy dùng câu mở đầu trực tiếp, chẳng hạn “Yes, bikes are quite popular in Vietnam”, sau đó nêu một lý do cụ thể và ví dụ về người thường đạp xe. Tránh nối nhiều ý bằng “as” và kết thúc câu rõ ràng.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Vietnam, especially for exercise. Many people cycle in the morning to stay fit, and I often see older people riding around parks or quiet streets.

× I used to has a bike

✓ I used to have a bike

After used to, use the base form of the verb. Has is not the base form; have is.

× when I grow up

✓ when I grew up

The speaker is describing a past change from childhood, so use the past-tense form grew.

× it's fit with my bodies now

✓ it fits my body now

The subject it is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb needs the -s ending: fits.

× my bodies

✓ my body

In this context, the speaker is referring to their own body as a whole, so the singular form body is appropriate.

× it's very f- famous is my country

✓ it is very famous in my country

The original phrase has incorrect word order. Put the subject before the verb and adjective, and place the location phrase after famous.

× cycling is the great way

✓ cycling is a great way

Use a before the singular countable noun phrase a great way when referring to one effective method in general.

× help theirs improve their muscles

✓ help them improve their muscles

The verb help needs an object pronoun referring to the people whose muscles improve. Use them, not the possessive pronoun theirs.