自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
I yes, I was, I was received, umm, buys for my birth date when I was 8. Umm, this is a pink and half the and half the four, uh, is pink and.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Uh, yes, model people in Vietnam, uh, I think they owns a bikes when they, uh, when they in when they in six because, umm. Bike.
評估
總分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 22.0建議: Bạn đã cố gắng trả lời có và nêu thời điểm nhận xe, nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều lần ngập ngừng và tự sửa khiến ý chưa rõ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng cấu trúc quá khứ đơn: “Yes, I did. I got…” Dùng “for my eighth birthday” thay cho “for my birth date”, và nói rõ chiếc xe màu gì hoặc bạn thích nó vì sao. Nên kết thúc bằng một ý hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ.
範例: Yes, I did. I got a pink bike for my eighth birthday, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 18.0建議: Bạn có trả lời “yes”, nhưng phần giải thích chưa rõ và câu trả lời bị ngắt quãng. Hãy dùng cụm “most people” thay cho “model people” và cấu trúc đúng “people own bikes”. Trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi về mức độ phổ biến, sau đó nêu một lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể, chẳng hạn xe đạp được dùng để đi học hoặc tập thể dục. Không cần nói người ta sở hữu xe từ sáu tuổi nếu bạn không chắc thông tin đó.
範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Vietnam. Many children use them to get to school, and adults often ride them for exercise.
文法
× I was received
✓ I received a bike.
The passive form was received suggests that someone received you. Use the active form received because you are describing receiving a bike.
× buys for my birth date when I was 8
✓ I bought a bike for my birthday when I was 8.
The sentence describes an event that happened when you were eight, so use the past-tense verb bought, not buys. Birthday is the usual word for the annual celebration.
× this is a pink ... is pink
✓ It was pink.
You are describing the bike in the past, so use was rather than is. The intervening words are unclear, so this correction preserves only the clear meaning.
× they owns a bikes
✓ They own bikes.
The subject they is plural, so it takes the base verb own, not owns. Check that the verb agrees with its subject.
× a bikes
✓ bikes
Bikes is plural, so it cannot be used with the singular article a. Remove a, or use a bike if you mean one bike.
× when they in when they in six
✓ when they are six years old
The clause is missing the verb are. Include a form of be before an age when describing how old someone is.
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