自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly first, then explain why you did not have a bike. Use the past tense for childhood experiences: “I wanted to learn,” not “I want to learn.” Also, say “too poor to afford a bike” rather than “so poor enough to buy a bike.” The phrase “At the double bag” is unclear, so remove it unless you can express what you mean clearly.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I really wanted to learn how to ride one, but my parents couldn’t afford to buy me a bike.

建議: Give a clear answer using “Yes, they’re very popular in my country.” Use “bikes” rather than “Mike,” and explain their popularity with a specific reason. For a natural comparison, you could say that cycling is a popular way to exercise, alongside running and walking. Avoid the unclear phrase “one of the most exercise people.”

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for exercise and commuting. Cycling is also a convenient way to get around, especially in busy cities.

× I want to learn how to ride a bike when I'm a child.

✓ I wanted to learn how to ride a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about your childhood, so use the past tense wanted and was to describe what you wanted at that time.

× But my parents are so poor enough to buy a bike.

✓ But my parents were too poor to buy a bike.

Use were because you are describing your parents' situation in the past. The phrase too poor to buy correctly expresses that they could not afford a bike.

× But my parents are so poor enough to buy a bike.

✓ But my parents were too poor to buy a bike.

So and enough do not fit together in this construction. Use too poor to buy a bike to mean that their poverty prevented them from buying one.

× Yes, biggest popular to my country because Mike is one of the most exercise people.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because biking is one of the most popular forms of exercise.

Biggest cannot modify popular; biggest is a superlative form, while popular needs very or most popular in this context. Use most popular before a plural noun phrase such as forms of exercise.

× Yes, biggest popular to my country because Mike is one of the most exercise people.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because biking is one of the most popular forms of exercise.

Use in, not to, with a country when describing where something is popular: popular in my country.

× Not even running, walking but only it's a bike.

✓ People do not only run and walk; they also ride bikes.

The paired conjunction should be not only ... but also. The correction uses that parallel structure to connect the activities clearly.