自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你提到了上学路程较远、骑车上学这一相关信息，但表达中有多处词语和语法错误，导致意思不清楚。先用一句话直接回答是否有自行车，再说明它的用途；注意讲过去经历时使用过去时，并避免重复表达。结尾的“taxi”与前文关系不明确，可以删去，或补充完整具体的故事。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My middle school was quite far from home, so I rode my bike there every day. It was a convenient way to get to school.

建議: 你表达了自行车环保这一观点，但开头关于科技发展和出行便利的部分不够清晰，且缺少对“是否流行”的直接回答。建议先明确回答，再用一两个具体理由支持观点，例如共享单车、短途通勤或环保；注意使用自然搭配，如“a popular way to get around”和“an environmentally friendly option”。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. They can also help people avoid traffic jams.

× Yes, I have a back one and worth a draw a child because my umm, middle school is far away from my home and then so I will take back. I will go to school by bike and one day when I go to school, uh taxi.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because my middle school was far away from my home, so I rode my bike to school. One day, I took a taxi to school.

问题是在描述童年经历时使用了现在时或将来时，如“have”“is”“will take”“will go”和“go”。这些事情发生在过去，应使用过去时，例如“had”“was”“rode”“took”。回答过去的问题时，注意整段经历中的动词时态保持一致。

× MMM in with the develop, with the technology development, people go out more and more Coffee Convenient

✓ With the development of technology, people can go out more conveniently.

表达“随着技术的发展”时，通常说“with the development of technology”，其中“of”用于连接“development”和“technology”。建议记住“the development of + 名词”这一结构。

× but I think bike is a green cycle.

✓ But I think bikes are a green form of transportation.

这里泛指自行车，应使用复数“bikes”，并与复数主语搭配使用“are”，而不是“bike is”。泛指一类事物时，常用复数名词。