自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，原因也比较清楚。注意表达“在户外打排球或篮球”时，应说“played volleyball or basketball outdoors”，而不是“played outside volleyball or basketball”。结尾“until I was older”与前文衔接不够自然，可以改成说明后来是否开始骑车，或简洁地结束回答。

範例: No, I didn’t. My parents were worried I might get hurt, so I usually played volleyball or basketball outdoors with them instead. I didn’t learn to ride a bike until I was a teenager.

建議: 回答回应了问题，并给出了价格和便利性两个理由。不过，“students of ride bikes”有语法错误，应改为“students ride bikes”；“to schools”通常可简化为“to school”。最后的“so they are used a lot”与前面的例子重复，可以删除，并用更具体的细节补充说明。

範例: Yes, I’d say bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips. In cities, many people use shared bikes to get around, while students often cycle to school. They’re especially useful when the traffic is heavy.

× My parents were worried that I might get hurt, so instead I usually played outside volleyball or basketball with my parents until I was older.

✓ My parents were worried that I might get hurt, so instead I usually played volleyball or basketball outside with my parents until I was older.

“Outside”修饰“played”，应放在运动项目“volleyball or basketball”之后，避免被误解为修饰“volleyball”。可以把地点副词放在宾语或活动内容之后，例如“play basketball outside”。

× For example, many people use shared bikes in the city and students of ride bikes to schools, so they are used a lot.

✓ For example, many people use shared bikes in the city, and students ride bikes to school, so bikes are used a lot.

“students of ride”中的“of”是多余且错误的介词；“students”后面应直接接谓语“ride”。表示学生骑车去上学时，通常说“ride bikes to school”，其中“school”用单数，不加冠词，表示上学这一活动。