自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one clear detail about the bike or how you used it. Use the natural phrase “a purple second-hand bike,” and check subject–verb agreement (for example, “it was”). The final sentence is unclear, so remove it or replace it with a complete thought. Avoid repeating the idea that you had the bike.

範例: Yes, I did. My cousin gave me a purple second-hand bike, and I was really proud of it. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: Make the subject and pronoun agree: say “Yes, they are” or “Yes, motorcycles are.” Explain why bikes are popular, and use the brand detail only if it supports your answer. Improve the phrasing to “commute to work, the supermarket, or shopping malls” and “travel to a nearby city”; avoid the awkward phrase “a next city.”

範例: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for daily travel. Many people use them to commute to work or go shopping. TVS, a well-known brand from my home state, is especially popular.

× She were they so good.

✓ They were so good.

The plural subject they takes the plural verb were. Use a subject and verb that agree in number; here, remove the extra subject she.

× Yes, it is.

✓ Yes, they are.

The question asks about bikes, a plural noun, so the answer should use the plural pronoun they and the matching verb are. Match pronouns to the nouns they refer to.

× We have millions of people driving bikes for their daily commute to work, to supermarket, to malls, to even a next city.

✓ We have millions of people driving bikes for their daily commute to work, to the supermarket, to malls, and even to another city.

Use the before supermarket when referring to the usual destination. A next city is not the natural article pattern here; use another city to mean an additional city. Review whether a noun is specific or whether another is needed to express one more item.