自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提供了年龄和生日礼物等具体细节。最后一句没有说完，影响表达完整性；“At that time I'm”时态错误，应改为“At that time, I was”。建议补充小时候骑这辆大自行车的感受，并用连接词自然衔接。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about six, and my mother gave it to me as a birthday present. It was a little too big for me at the time, but I was really excited to ride it.

建議: 你直接回答了问题，也提到了共享单车，但后半部分语法不自然且句子未完成。“especially we have”可改为“especially because shared bikes are widely available”；“It was called”也没有说出名称。建议说明共享单车为什么受欢迎，并用完整句子结束回答。

範例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country, especially shared bikes, which are easy to find in many cities. People often use them for short trips because they are convenient and affordable.

× But it's still huge. At that time I'm a little.

✓ But it was still huge. At that time, I was little.

这段话是在回忆小时候的事，因此描述当时自行车很大、自己年纪还小时，应使用一般过去时。将“it's”改为“it was”，将“I'm”改为“I was”。“I was little”表示“我当时还很小”。

× Of course, bikes are very popular in my country, especially we have the special shared bike, you know.

✓ Of course, bikes are very popular in my country, especially because we have a special kind of shared bike, you know.

“especially we have...”不能自然地连接前后内容，句子结构不完整。若要说明共享单车是自行车受欢迎的一个原因，可以用“especially because...”来连接；“a special kind of shared bike”表示“一种特别的共享单车”。