自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then add one clear supporting detail. Use “I had one” rather than “I had it one,” and “I loved cycling” rather than “I used to live cycling.” The final part is unclear: explain simply whether you still ride or would buy a bike again. Avoid repeating “shame.”

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike and loved riding it every day when I was a child. I don’t ride much now, but I’d be happy to buy one again.

建議: Give a direct answer and support it with a clear, natural reason. Say “bikes aren’t very popular” instead of “it’s not popular,” “Thai people” instead of “a Thai people,” and “the weather in Thailand is hot” instead of “the Thai water is hot.” Use “for outdoor activities” and connect your reason with “so.”

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Thailand. The weather is often extremely hot, so many people prefer indoor activities or travelling by car or motorbike. However, cycling can be popular in cooler areas or early in the morning.

× Yeah, I had it one.

✓ Yeah, I had one.

Use one to refer to a bike without repeating the noun. It is unnecessary here and makes the phrase ungrammatical.

× I'm with being shame.

✓ I feel ashamed.

Shame is a noun, but this sentence needs an adjective after feel. Use ashamed to describe how you feel.

× I have no shame to buy again.

✓ I have no shame in buying one again.

The standard construction is have no shame in doing something. Use the preposition in followed by a gerund, and include one to refer to the bike.

× I don't think it's popular in my country.

✓ I don't think they are popular in my country.

The question asks about bikes, a plural noun, so use the plural pronoun they rather than it.

× As a Thai people, I think the Thai water is quite hot.

✓ As a Thai person, I think the Thai water is quite hot.

The singular article a must be followed by a singular countable noun. Use person, not people, after a.

× The Thai water is quite hot for do the activities from outdoor.

✓ The Thai water is quite hot for doing the activities from outdoor.

When for is followed by a verb, use the gerund form ending in -ing. Change do to doing.

× The Thai water is quite hot for doing the activities from outdoor.

✓ The Thai water is quite hot for doing the activities outdoors.

From is not the appropriate preposition here. Use outdoors to indicate where the activities take place.

× It would be nice that we do something indoor instead of outdoor.

✓ It would be nice for us to do something indoors instead of outdoors.

Use indoors and outdoors as adverbs to describe where the activity takes place. Indoor and outdoor are generally adjectives, as in indoor activities and outdoor activities.