自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответьте прямо и добавьте одну конкретную деталь о велосипеде или о том, как вы им пользовались. Исправьте ошибки: говорите «I liked it very much» о прошлом и «learned how to ride a bike», а не «write on a bike». Уберите повтор «on this bike» и не называйте велосипед «this transport» — это звучит неестественно.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. It was the bike I learned to ride on, so I have fond memories of it.

建議: Дайте ясный ответ и логично объясните его: наличие велодорожек не обязательно означает, что велосипеды популярны. Исправьте грамматику: «People in my country mostly use cars» и «bikes are a popular means of transport». Уточните, где или для чего люди используют велосипеды, чтобы ответ был конкретнее.

範例: Not particularly. Although some cities have bike lanes, most people in my country rely on cars for their daily commute. Bikes are more popular for exercise or short trips than as a main form of transport.

× It was like a little pink bike and I like that very much.

✓ It was like a little pink bike, and I liked it very much.

The speaker is describing a childhood bike, so the past-tense verb liked is needed instead of the present-tense like. It also refers more clearly to the bike than that.

× Besides we have a road for a bike riders.

✓ Besides, we have a road for bike riders.

The plural noun phrase bike riders cannot be preceded by the singular indefinite article a. Remove the article. A comma after Besides also makes the introductory word easier to read.

× People in my country are mostly use cars, so I don't think bikes are really popular transport for my country.

✓ People in my country mostly use cars, so I don't think bikes are really popular transport in my country.

Use the present simple form use to describe a general habit. The auxiliary are does not belong before the base verb use here. Use in my country to describe where bikes are popular.