自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Use the article “a” before “bike,” and avoid repeating the same idea with “concerned” and “safety concerns.” Give a brief, clear reason.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents were worried about my safety. They thought I might get hurt riding on the busy roads near our home.

建議: Your opening directly answers the question, but correct the subject–verb agreement (“people use”) and make the phrase “easy for travelling” more natural, such as “convenient for short trips.” Avoid repeating or restarting your final idea; explain one specific benefit instead.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they’re convenient and inexpensive. They’re especially useful for getting around crowded neighbourhoods.

× No, I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change don't have to didn't have.

× When I was a child my parents won't let me use bike as they are concerned because of safety concerns.

✓ When I was a child, my parents wouldn't let me ride a bike because they were concerned about safety.

Use wouldn't let to describe a past refusal or restriction. Won't refers to the future or a present intention, so it does not fit the past-time context.

× When I was a child my parents won't let me use bike as they are concerned because of safety concerns.

✓ When I was a child, my parents wouldn't let me ride a bike because they were concerned about safety.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bike. The correction also uses the natural expression ride a bike.

× When I was a child my parents won't let me use bike as they are concerned because of safety concerns.

✓ When I was a child, my parents wouldn't let me ride a bike because they were concerned about safety.

The sentence describes the parents' feelings when the student was a child, so use the past form were rather than are. Use concerned about safety instead of the repetitive phrase concerned because of safety concerns.

× Most people uses bikes because they are easy for travelling within a short distance.

✓ Most people use bikes because they are easy for traveling within a short distance.

People is plural, so it takes the base form use, not the singular form uses. Make sure the verb agrees with the subject.

× It makes it is it makes people comfortable to ride.

✓ It makes people comfortable to ride.

The sentence contains a repeated and abandoned phrase, which makes its structure unclear. Remove the false start and continue with one complete clause.