自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then briefly explain what you were allowed to ride and when you rode it. Use “ride” rather than “write,” and say “scooter” instead of “scooty” for more natural English. Avoid “obviously” and the repeated fillers; also, clarify that you were too young to ride a motorbike legally.

範例: No, I wasn’t allowed to ride a scooter or motorbike because I was too young. However, I had a bicycle, and I used to ride it with my friends every evening.

建議: Give a direct answer and support it with a clear reason or example. Correct the grammar in “almost every people” and “people who walks,” and replace “walks in office” with “commute to work.” Avoid repeating “convenient” and “easy”; instead, explain specifically how scooters or motorbikes can save time or money.

範例: Yes, scooters and motorbikes are very popular in my country. They’re especially common among people who commute to work because they’re relatively affordable and use less fuel than cars. They can also be easier to park in busy areas.

× Yes, it is very popular.

✓ Yes, they are very popular.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they and the plural verb are to match the plural noun.

× I think I have seen almost every people in the road riding a scooter or motorbike.

✓ I think I have seen almost everyone on the road riding a scooter or motorbike.

Every cannot directly modify the plural noun people. Use everyone or every person. This correction also uses the conventional preposition on with the phrase on the road.

× I think I have seen almost every people in the road riding a scooter or motorbike.

✓ I think I have seen almost everyone on the road riding a scooter or motorbike.

The usual expression for people riding or traveling on a road is on the road, not in the road. Use on for this context.

× Umm, also it's very convenient for for those people who walks in office because it can also save them money and it doesn't cost a lot for the fuel.

✓ Umm, also it's very convenient for those people who walk in the office because it can also save them money and it doesn't cost a lot for fuel.

The relative pronoun who refers to those people, a plural subject, so the verb must be walk rather than walks. The repeated for is also removed, and fuel is used without the because it refers to fuel generally.