自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答与问题相关，但注意不要把 bike 说成 bag。表达过去年龄时说 “when I was six”，表达妈妈买给你时说 “My mother bought it for me”，而不是 “sold to me”。“I very like it” 应改为 “I really liked it”。请补全最后一句，并用一两句具体说明你常骑车做什么。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was six. My mother bought it for me, and I really liked it. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

建議: 先直接回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用观察到的情况解释。描述普遍现象时用现在时，例如 “I often see people riding bikes”；“draw the back” 应为 “ride bikes”，“go to the work” 应为 “go to work”。避免重复词语，并可补充一个具体原因或场景。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them to work, especially in busy city centers. They are convenient and help people avoid traffic.

× Yes, I had a bag when I six years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bag when I was six years old.

表示过去的年龄时，when 从句需要谓语动词 be。这里缺少 was，因此应说“when I was six years old”。

× My mother sold to me.

✓ My mother sold it to me.

sell 是及物动词，这里需要说明母亲卖给“我”的东西。根据上下文补上宾语 it，使句子结构完整。

× I very like it.

✓ I really like it.

very 通常不能直接修饰动词 like。修饰动词时应使用 really；也可以说“I like it very much”。

× Yes, I I often saw many people draw draw the back when when they go to the work.

✓ Yes, I often see many people draw the back when they go to the work.

这里描述的是经常发生的情况，应使用一般现在时。often saw 是一般过去时，应改为 often see。

× Yes, I I often saw many people draw draw the back when when they go to the work.

✓ Yes, I often see many people draw the back when they go to work.

表示“去上班”时，固定说法是 go to work，work 前通常不加定冠词 the。