自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提供了年龄和父亲教你骑车的细节。注意“骑自行车”应说“ride a bike”，不是“write a bike”；“很有趣”用“fun”比“funny”更自然。“and”重复较多，可以用“After that”连接细节，并补充一个具体回忆。

範例: Yes, I had a bike as a child. My father bought me one when I was six and taught me how to ride it. I remember enjoying our practice sessions, even though I fell off a few times.

建議: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，并说明原因。你提到了人们买东西的需求，但“need to buy go to the grocery”语法不通顺，可改为“need to go grocery shopping”；“write a motorcycle”应为“ride a motorcycle”。此外，比较时要说明摩托车为何更方便，并避免重复“it”。

範例: No, bicycles aren’t very popular in my country, especially among people who need to travel longer distances. Many people prefer motorcycles because they can carry groceries more easily and get around faster.

× No, it's not very popular because people need to buy go to the grocery and buy things so it it is more convenient to write a motorcycle.

✓ No, they aren't very popular because people need to buy go to the grocery and buy things, so it is more convenient to write a motorcycle.

“bikes”是复数，因此后面应使用复数代词“they”，并搭配“aren't”，不能用单数“it”和“isn't”。另外，“so”后面的“it”重复了一次，应删去一个。

× No, it's not very popular because people need to buy go to the grocery and buy things so it it is more convenient to write a motorcycle.

✓ No, it's not very popular because people need to go to the grocery and buy things, so it is more convenient to write a motorcycle.

“need to”后应接动词原形。这里“buy go”把两个动词错误地连在一起；根据句意，应删去多余的“buy”，改为“need to go”。也可以说“need to buy things”，但不能说“need to buy go”。