自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 开头直接回答了问题，但有较多重复、停顿和自我修正，影响自然度。注意全程使用过去时，例如用“it wasn’t”及“there were”；“on both sides”比“on the both side”更自然。可以简洁说明自行车的特点，以及辅助轮如何帮助你学骑车。

範例: Yes, I did. It was a small bike with training wheels on both sides, which helped me feel more stable while I was learning to ride.

建議: 先明确回答问题，并确认你说的是“bikes”而不是“bags”；另外，“bikes”是复数，后面应搭配“are”。你给出了国家地域辽阔、城市距离远的理由，但可以更清楚地说明这为什么会降低骑自行车的普及度，并用“by car”或“long distances”表达得更自然。减少重复和填充词，让回答更流畅。

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. The country is so large that many places are hundreds of kilometres apart, so people usually travel by car rather than by bike. Bikes are more common for short trips around town.

× I had a bike when I have uh, when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

这句话讲的是童年时的经历，应使用过去时。have 是现在时，应改为 was。讲述过去的事情时，注意保持时态一致。

× It was the not regular one.

✓ It was not a regular one.

这里说的是一辆非特定的自行车，应使用不定冠词 a，而不是定冠词 the。此外，a 应放在形容词 regular 前。可以记住结构：a + 形容词 + 名词。

× There are two training wheels on the both side.

✓ There were two training wheels on both sides.

这句话描述的是小时候的情况，因此应将现在时 are 改为过去时 were。描述过去发生或存在的事物时，要使用过去时。

× On the both side.

✓ On both sides.

both 前通常不加定冠词 the，因此应删除 the。可以记住固定表达：both sides。

× On the both side.

✓ On both sides.

both 表示“两边”，后面的可数名词应使用复数 sides，而不是单数 side。看到 both 时，注意检查后面的名词是否需要用复数。

× I don't think bags is very popular in my country.

✓ I don't think bags are very popular in my country.

主语 bags 是复数，因此 be 动词应使用 are，而不是 is。选择 be 动词时，要根据主语的单复数保持一致。

× So without the car, that is inconvenient to travel long distance.

✓ So without a car, it is inconvenient to travel long distances.

这里泛指汽车，不是某一辆特定的车，所以应使用不定冠词 a，而不是 the。泛指单数可数名词时，通常需要使用 a 或 an。

× So without the car, that is inconvenient to travel long distance.

✓ So without a car, it is inconvenient to travel long distances.

这里泛指长距离出行，long distances 比 long distance 更合适。表示通常情况或多个距离时，应使用复数 distances。