自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，并使用过去时描述童年经历：把“I do have”改为“I had”，“ride”改为“rode”。避免重复和中途改口，例如“play play”及“in in”。可以按“是否有自行车—骑车去哪里—在那里做什么”的顺序组织内容，并准确说“play hide-and-seek”。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was little. I often rode it to the park with my best friend from elementary school. We played hide-and-seek there, and sometimes we rode our bikes around the park.

建議: 开头直接回答，并使用复数“bikes”或更自然的“bike-sharing services”。将“public black can rent”改为“public bikes that people can rent”，说明租车价格便宜的原因或举例即可。注意删去“uh”“umm”等填充词，并避免用“because”重复连接理由和例子。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Public bike-sharing services are convenient and affordable. For example, you can rent a bike for about 10 New Taiwan dollars an hour.

× I do have a bike when I was little.

✓ I had a bike when I was little.

这里描述的是小时候的经历，时间发生在过去，因此应使用过去时。将“do have”改为“had”。

× I always ride on my bike to the park and play with my best friend.

✓ I always rode my bike to the park and played with my best friend.

这句话延续了“小时候”的过去时间背景，因此“ride”和“play”都应使用过去式：“rode”和“played”。

× We usually play ... in the elementary school.

✓ We usually played ... at elementary school.

表示在上小学期间，通常说“at elementary school”或“in elementary school”，不在“elementary school”前使用定冠词“the”。此处改为“at elementary school”。

× We usually play play high and hide and find game ... and we sometimes ride the bike.

✓ We usually played hide-and-seek in the park, and we sometimes rode our bikes.

这句话讲的是小时候经常做的事情，应使用过去时：“play”改为“played”，“ride”改为“rode”。

× I think bike is popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数“bikes”，并与复数主语搭配使用“are”。

× Because there are public black can rent and almost, it's a very cheap price to have it.

✓ Because there are public bikes that people can rent, and they are very cheap.

原句中“public black can rent”缺少清楚的名词和完整的主谓结构。可改为“public bikes that people can rent”（人们可以租用的公共自行车）；后半句用“they”指代复数的自行车，并补上谓语“are”。