自行车— Part 1 評分報告
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Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I remember that I have uh I had a bicycle when I was a child and I was uh using so much, but one once I remember it was stolen in the uh around my apartment and I was so sad because I used to love it so much. Then I found it and it was broken.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
We actually don't have so much uh good roads for re- uh using a bicycle, so I don't think uh I would answer this question as a yes. So in Europe uh it's more flat country so riding a bicycle is easier but in my country it's um it has more
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Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 68.0建議: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamanız ve bisikletinizle ilgili kişisel bir anı paylaşmanız güçlü yönleriniz. Ancak geçmişten bahsederken zaman uyumuna dikkat edin: “I have” yerine “I had” kullanın. “I was using so much” doğal değil; “I rode it a lot” daha uygun. “One once I remember” gibi tekrarları çıkarın ve bisikletin çalınmasıyla ilgili olayı daha akıcı anlatmak için “Unfortunately” ve “Eventually” gibi bağlaçlardan yararlanın.
範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child, and I rode it almost every day. Unfortunately, it was stolen near my apartment one day, which made me really sad because I loved it. Eventually, I found it, but it was damaged.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 40.0建議: Yanıtınızda bisiklet kullanımını yolların durumuyla ilişkilendirmeniz soruya uygun bir fikir sunuyor; ancak cevabınız tamamlanmadığı için görüşünüz ve gerekçeniz netleşmiyor. İlk cümlede doğrudan “Bisikletler çok popüler değil” şeklinde yanıt verin. “Good roads for using a bicycle” yerine “bike-friendly roads” veya “safe cycling infrastructure” kullanabilirsiniz. Avrupa ile karşılaştırmayı genellemek yerine, kendi ülkenizdeki yol koşulları ya da insanların ulaşım tercihleri hakkında belirli bir ayrıntı ekleyin.
範例: I wouldn’t say bikes are very popular in my country. In many areas, there aren’t enough bike-friendly roads, so cycling can feel unsafe. As a result, people often prefer to drive or use public transport. However, cycling is more common in places with safer routes.
文法
× Once I remember it was stolen in the around my apartment.
✓ Once, I remember, it was stolen around my apartment.
The preposition in is incorrectly used before around. Use around by itself to describe the location where the bicycle was stolen.
× We actually don't have so much good roads for using a bicycle.
✓ We actually don't have many good roads for riding a bicycle.
Roads is a plural countable noun, so use many rather than much. Much is used with uncountable nouns.
× So in Europe it's more flat country, so riding a bicycle is easier.
✓ So, in Europe, it's a flatter country, so riding a bicycle is easier.
Country is a singular countable noun and needs an article. Use a before flatter country.
× So in Europe it's more flat country, so riding a bicycle is easier.
✓ So, in Europe, it's a flatter country, so riding a bicycle is easier.
For the one-syllable adjective flat, form the comparative with -er: flatter, not more flat. Use the comparative when comparing the terrain with that of another place.
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