自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答切题，也提供了父亲送自行车这一具体细节。不过，谈童年经历时应使用过去时，将“have”改为“had”；“built it for me and for my eighth birthday”表达不自然，可改为“built it for me as a gift for my eighth birthday”。建议补充一个简短细节，例如你如何使用这辆车。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father built it for me as a gift for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

建議: 回答直接，但第二句有语法错误。“In the city I live and there are”应改为“In the city where I live, there are”或“In my city, there are”。可以再说明共享单车为什么受欢迎，或举例说明人们如何使用它，让回答更具体、连贯。

範例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in the city where I live. There are lots of shared bikes, and many people use them for short trips because they’re convenient and affordable.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车，时间背景是过去，因此应使用一般过去时。把 have 改为 had。

× In the city I live and there are many shared bikes.

✓ In the city where I live, there are many shared bikes.

表示“居住在某个城市”时，通常说 live in a city。这里可用 where 引导定语从句，表达“我居住的城市”；同时去掉不恰当地连接两个部分的 and。