自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，并用过去时描述童年经历（如“I had a bike”）。注意“骑自行车”应说“ride a bike”，不能说“read a bike”或“play bike”；“我喜欢”后面需要补充完整内容。避免重复“umm”和“only”，并用一两个具体细节说明你喜欢骑车的原因或骑车的经历。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it around my neighborhood, even though some people thought bikes were mostly for boys.

建議: 回答切题，也提到了中国街上的自行车和共享单车，但要修正表达：“There are shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”，而不是“There’s sharing bike”；“骑车出行”可以说“ride them to get around”，不要说“read in as a vocal”。用具体场景或原因补充观点，并注意主谓一致及自然表达，避免“always”这类过于绝对的说法。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. You can see people cycling on city streets, and shared bikes are convenient for short trips, especially when public transport is not nearby.

× Yes, I have a bag.

✓ Yes, I had a bag.

问题是在回答关于童年经历的问题，语境明确指过去，因此应将一般现在时 have 改为一般过去时 had。这里仅修改时态；“bag”与问题内容是否匹配属于词义问题，不在指定的语法问题类型范围内。

× When I was a child, umm, many people will think umm only only boys like to play bike.

✓ When I was a child, many people thought that only boys liked to play bike.

这句话描述童年时期人们的想法，应使用过去时 thought，而不是表示将来的 will think。为了与 thought 的过去语境保持一致，从句中的 like 也改为 liked。

× But although I'm a girl, I like to.

✓ Although I'm a girl, I like to.

But 和 although 都表示转折，在这里同时使用显得重复。保留其中一个即可，例如保留 although，并删除句首的 But。

× But although I'm a girl, I like to.

✓ Although I'm a girl, I like to ride bikes.

句末的 like to 后面缺少动词，句子结构不完整。like to 后应接动词原形；这里补上 ride bikes，使表达完整。

× There's sharing bike in the street too.

✓ There are shared bikes in the street too.

句子表示街上有多辆共享单车，因此应使用 There are，并将可数名词 bike 改为复数 bikes。原句的单数可数名词前也缺少限定词；改为复数后不需要加 a。shared bikes 表示“共享单车”。