自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and use consistent past-tense forms. Avoid repeating the subject ("My father, he") and correct phrases such as "I was so in love" to "I loved it." The final sentence is unfinished, so complete the idea. Add one specific detail about where you rode the bike or how you felt, and use a linking word such as "because" or "so."

範例: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was about eight. My father bought it for me, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood every day. I sometimes got so absorbed in playing that I didn't want to stop, even when it was time for a nap.

建議: Give a clear answer using the natural phrase "bikes are very popular." Correct the subject-verb agreement: say "everyone has," or avoid the broad claim that everyone owns a bike. Support your answer with a specific example, such as people cycling to work or using bike-sharing services, and connect it with "for example" or "because."

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people cycle to work or use shared bikes for short trips because they are convenient and affordable.

× I like it.

✓ I liked it.

The speaker is describing a bike from childhood, so the past simple liked is appropriate for an experience in the past. Use the past tense when describing how you felt about the bike then.

× I was using the at it every single day.

✓ I used it every single day.

The preposition at is not used after use in this sentence. Also, do not put the before the pronoun it. For a repeated past habit, the simple past used is natural.

× I couldn't leave my bike in the.

✓ I couldn't leave my bike behind.

The phrase in the is incomplete because the is followed by no noun. Complete the phrase with a noun, such as in the garage, or use a complete expression such as leave my bike behind.

× Bikes that are very popular in my country.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country.

The original wording uses that are to introduce a relative clause, but it does not form a complete main clause. Remove that are so the sentence has a clear subject and verb.

× Everyone have a bike in the street.

✓ Everyone has a bike in the street.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so it takes the singular verb has, not have. Use has with everyone, someone, and similar indefinite pronouns.