自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın; “It’s a good question” gibi gereksiz bir giriş yapmayın. “Cause” yerine daha uygun olan “because” kullanın ve “suitable eligible” gibi aynı anlamı tekrarlayan ifadelerden kaçının. Bisiklet sürmenin neden uygun olmadığını, örneğin yolların engebeli veya trafiğin yoğun olduğunu belirterek açıklayın.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my hometown wasn’t very suitable for cycling. The roads were quite steep, and there wasn’t much space for cyclists.

建議: İlk cümlede karşılaştırmayı doğru kurun: “Bikes aren’t as popular as they used to be.” “Face development technologies” doğal bir ifade değil; kastınız buysa “rapid technological development” veya “the increased availability of cars” diyebilirsiniz. Bisikletlerin neden daha az popüler olduğunu net bir neden ve kısa bir örnekle açıklayın; “uh” gibi duraksamaları azaltın.

範例: Bikes aren’t as popular in my country as they used to be. Many people prefer driving because cars are more affordable and convenient now. As a result, fewer people use bikes for their daily commute.

× I didn't have a bicycle in my childhood cause my town's, my town, my hometown wasn't suitable eligible for riding a bicycle.

✓ I didn't have a bicycle in my childhood because my hometown wasn't suitable for riding a bicycle.

Suitable and eligible do not work together here. Use suitable for to describe whether a place is appropriate for an activity. Eligible usually describes a person or group that meets the requirements for something.

× Bikes are not getting popular in my country as used to be

✓ Bikes are not as popular in my country as they used to be.

The comparison needs the matching structure not as + adjective + as. The clause after the second as also needs a subject: they refers to bikes.

× because of the face development technologies

✓ because of the rapid development of technology

In this noun phrase, development is followed by of to identify what is developing. The corrected phrase is because of the rapid development of technology.

× People nowadays can reach uh, brand new car.

✓ People nowadays can reach a brand-new car.

Brand-new car is a singular countable noun phrase, so it needs the article a. The filler uh is not needed in the written correction.