自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and use the past tense because you are describing childhood: say “When I was a child, I had…”. Correct “it’s has” to “it had” or “it has,” and use “I really liked the color” rather than “I love the color too much.” You can connect your reason and extra detail with “because” and “also.”

範例: Yes, I did. When I was little, I had a bike with four wheels, so it was easy to ride. I also really liked its color.

建議: Give a clear answer first, and avoid the redundant phrase “In my opinion, I think”—use one or the other. Use “they” to refer to bikes, add “is” in “it is more convenient,” and replace “draw the traffic jam” with “avoid traffic jams.” Include a specific reason, such as convenience for short trips.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and help them avoid traffic jams.

× Whenever a child, I has a bike that I like very much because it's has four wheels, it's easy to ride and I love the color too much.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike that I liked very much because it had four wheels, was easy to ride, and I loved its color very much.

Whenever a child is an incomplete clause because it has no subject or verb. Use When I was a child to give the clause a subject and a verb. The correction also adjusts the surrounding verbs to the past tense to match the childhood context.

× Whenever a child, I has a bike that I like very much because it's has four wheels, it's easy to ride and I love the color too much.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike that I liked very much because it had four wheels, was easy to ride, and I loved its color very much.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had, liked, and loved rather than has, like, and love. The verb describing the bike's four wheels should also be had.

× Whenever a child, I has a bike that I like very much because it's has four wheels, it's easy to ride and I love the color too much.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike that I liked very much because it had four wheels, was easy to ride, and I loved its color very much.

It's means it is or it has, so it's has incorrectly places two verbs together. Use it had to describe the bike in the past. Also, use its, the possessive form, to show that the color belongs to the bike.

× Whenever a child, I has a bike that I like very much because it's has four wheels, it's easy to ride and I love the color too much.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike that I liked very much because it had four wheels, was easy to ride, and I loved its color very much.

Too much usually suggests an excessive amount, which does not fit the intended meaning. Use very much to express that you liked the color a lot.

× In my opinion, I think it is really popular in my country because many people like to use it.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are really popular in my country because many people like to use them.

The answer refers to bikes, a plural noun, so the plural pronoun them is needed instead of it. Using bikes and are also makes the plural reference clear.

× It more convenient to draw the traffic jam.

✓ It is more convenient to draw the traffic jam.

The sentence needs the linking verb is between the subject it and the adjective more convenient. Without is, the sentence has no main verb.