自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你把题目中的“bike”听成了“bug”，也没有回答考官的问题。先确认关键词：这里问的是你小时候有没有自行车。回答时先直接说有或没有，再补充一项具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的经历。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

建議: 你提到了台湾家庭和上学通勤，内容与题目相关，但开头表达不清，且把“bikes”说成了“motorcycle”，容易造成概念混淆。先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用一两个具体理由或例子支持观点。注意使用完整句子，并删去“I think that this that”等重复、未完成的表达。

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in Taiwan, especially among children and people who live near their schools or workplaces. They are convenient for short trips, and cycling is also a good way to exercise.

× Did you have a bug when you were the child?

✓ Did you have a bug when you were a child?

这里泛指“小时候”，应使用不定冠词 a，而不是定冠词 the。

× I think not speak like popular, I think maybe like everyone had a motorcycle.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular. I think maybe everyone has a motorcycle.

第一部分缺少完整的主谓结构；表达否定观点时，可以说 “I don't think + 主语 + 谓语”。第二部分中，like 后缺少合适的句子结构；直接说 “I think maybe everyone has...”。这里谈论现在的情况，因此用一般现在时 has。

× Seemed like at Taiwan, every home, every child had that their own bike just used to, uh, go to school or go to get the work.

✓ It seemed like in Taiwan, every child had their own bike and used to ride it to school or to work.

表示“在台湾”应使用 in，而不是 at。另外，原句中的 “go to get the work” 介词搭配不正确；表示“去上班”通常说 go to work。

× Seemed like at Taiwan, every home, every child had that their own bike just used to, uh, go to school or go to get the work.

✓ It seemed like in Taiwan, every child had their own bike and used to ride it to school or to work.

“had that their own bike”中 that 多余，不能这样放在名词短语前。可直接说 “had their own bike”。改写后用 it 指代 bike，避免重复。

× Seemed like at Taiwan, every home, every child had that their own bike just used to, uh, go to school or go to get the work.

✓ It seemed like in Taiwan, every child had their own bike and used to ride it to school or to work.

work 表示“工作、上班”时通常是不可数名词，不加 the。应说 “go to work”，而不是 “go to get the work”。

× I think that this that.

✓ I think that's true.

原句重复使用 that，且没有表达完整意思，句子结构不完整。可以根据语境说 “I think that's true.”；如果只是口语中的停顿或自我中断，也可以删去这段未完成的话。