自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充原因。注意过去时应使用“didn’t have”，而不是“haven’t have”；“买自行车”应说“buy me a bike”或“buy a bike for me”，不是“buying back”或“to me”。建议用“because”连接原因，并避免把多个意思挤在一个长句里。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it would be dangerous for me, so they never bought me one.

建議: 回答清楚，也提到了电动自行车，但原因部分的句式不正确。“for the reason is that”可改为“because”；“electronic bikes”更自然的说法是“electric bikes”，并注意用“they are”指代复数的自行车。可以再补充一个具体场景，例如通勤或避开交通拥堵。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially electric bikes. They’re convenient and eco-friendly, so many people use them to commute to work or school.

× No, I haven't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought buying back is dangerous for me so they never bought a bike to me.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought riding a bike was dangerous for me, and they never bought a bike for me.

这句话描述的是童年时的情况，应使用一般过去时。“haven't have”应改为“didn't have”；“thought”表示过去的想法，因此后面的“is”也应改为“was”。

× No, I haven't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought buying back is dangerous for me so they never bought a bike to me.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought riding a bike was dangerous for me, and they never bought a bike for me.

“because”和“so”不能在这个句子中同时用来连接同一组因果关系。保留“because”说明原因后，应删除“so”，并用“and”连接后面的并列信息。

× No, I haven't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought buying back is dangerous for me so they never bought a bike to me.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought riding a bike was dangerous for me, and they never bought a bike for me.

表达“给某人买某物”时，通常说“buy something for someone”，因此“bought a bike to me”应改为“bought a bike for me”。

× Yes, bikes are so popular in my country, especially the electronic bikes, uh, for the reason is that is convenient and is eco-friendly.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially electronic bikes, because they are convenient and eco-friendly.

“for the reason is that is convenient”结构不完整且表达不自然。“the reason is that”后面需要完整的从句，但原句缺少明确的主语。可直接用“because they are convenient and eco-friendly”说明原因；“they”指代复数的“bikes”。