自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer naturally with “Yes, I did” or “Yes, I had one.” Correct the phrase “throughout my childhood,” and use “my bike” rather than “the bike.” Your detail about riding with friends to buy sweets is specific and effective, so keep it and connect it smoothly to your main answer.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bike throughout my childhood, and I often rode it with my friends. We sometimes cycled to nearby supermarkets to buy sweets.

建議: Give a clear answer without fillers or repeated phrases such as “it’s like.” Say “many people use bikes” and “save money on transportation.” You could make your answer more specific by mentioning who uses bikes or why they are convenient.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live close to work. They’re an affordable way to get around, and cycling can also be enjoyable and good exercise.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the past simple auxiliary did, so the short affirmative answer should use did as well. In short answers, repeat the auxiliary from the question: Did you have a bike? Yes, I did.

× I enjoyed it the my whole childhood.

✓ I enjoyed it my whole childhood.

The definite article the should not come before the possessive determiner my. Use either my whole childhood or the whole of my childhood.

× Um, many people it's like it's a common way to commute to work or school, uh, so they can save money for transportation and enjoy riding.

✓ Um, many people use bikes as a common way to commute to work or school, so they can save money for transportation and enjoy riding.

The phrase many people it's like it's combines incomplete, conflicting clause structures. Make many people the subject and use the verb use to complete the clause. Removing the false start also makes the sentence clearer.