自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly using “I didn’t have one either.” Use the past tense “couldn’t afford” to match the time period, and say “a bike” or “one” rather than “this.” You could add a brief detail about how you got around instead.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school.

建議: Give a clear answer first, then explain who uses bikes and why. Avoid fillers such as “uh,” use “people” rather than “peoples,” and replace the unclear phrase “get used to using this bike” with a more natural expression such as “commute by bike.” Add a specific reason or example.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Many people commute by bike because it’s affordable and convenient, and it can be quicker than driving during rush hour.

× I didn't also when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have one when I was a child either.

The original sentence is incomplete because didn't needs a main verb, such as have. Use one to refer back to a bike without repeating the noun.

× I didn't also when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have one when I was a child either.

In a negative sentence, either is usually placed at the end to mean also not. Also is not used in this position after didn't.

× My parents can't afford this.

✓ My parents couldn't afford one.

The answer refers to the time when the student was a child, so the past form couldn't is appropriate. One clearly refers to a bike.

× Yes, I do believe uh, the bike is very popular in our country uh, sometimes, uh, the peoples go to work, they get used to using this bike.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in our country. Sometimes people go to work by bike; they are used to using bikes.

The is not normally used before a plural noun when making a general statement. Use bikes are very popular to refer to bikes in general.

× Yes, I do believe uh, the bike is very popular in our country uh, sometimes, uh, the peoples go to work, they get used to using this bike.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in our country. Sometimes people go to work by bike; they are used to using bikes.

People is already the plural form of person; peoples usually refers to distinct ethnic or cultural groups. Use people when referring generally to individuals.

× Yes, I do believe uh, the bike is very popular in our country uh, sometimes, uh, the peoples go to work, they get used to using this bike.

✓ Yes, I believe bikes are very popular in our country. Sometimes people go to work by bike; they are used to using bikes.

The original response joins complete clauses with commas, creating a comma splice. Separate the ideas with a period or join closely related clauses with a semicolon or a conjunction.