自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời có cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp nhưng cụm “a bike tour ride bike” không tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Hãy dùng cấu trúc đơn giản “Yes, I did” rồi thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn loại xe đạp hoặc nơi bạn thường đạp. Tránh lặp từ “bike”.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

建議: Câu trả lời hiện chưa diễn đạt rõ ý; các cụm “Yes I know,” “a big name” và “in pie” không phù hợp hoặc khó hiểu trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy trả lời thẳng câu hỏi bằng “Yes, I think they are” hoặc “No, I don’t think so”, sau đó đưa ra một lý do cụ thể. Có thể dùng từ nối như “because” để liên kết ý.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are affordable and convenient.

× When I was a child I had a bike tour ride bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike to ride.

The phrase 'a bike tour ride bike' does not form a grammatical structure. Use 'a bike to ride' to express that you had a bike for riding. The comma after the introductory time clause improves punctuation.

× Yes I know, McCantry is a big name in pie Bies are popular in Macanchi.

✓ Yes, I know. McCantry is a big name in pie. Bies are popular in Macanchi.

The original has several complete clauses joined without appropriate punctuation, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the clauses with periods. 'Bies' may be a spelling or transcription error, but it is not corrected here because spelling errors are not included in the provided grammar problem types.