自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，例如“是的，我小时候有一辆自行车”。注意时态和搭配：过去的经历用过去时，“buy a bike for me”或“buy me a bike”比“buy a bike to me”自然；“I really appreciated it”比“I very appreciated to my parents”正确。可以补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、你骑车去哪里，以及这段经历带给你的感受。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a small red one, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood. I was thrilled because it gave me a sense of freedom.

建議: 回答中把“bikes”误说成了“bags”，而“draw the cars”应改为“drive their cars”。请先明确表明自行车现在是否受欢迎，再说明原因；避免用“old bikes”概括所有自行车。可以用“although / however / because”等连接词，并加入具体情况，例如城市通勤、交通拥堵或共享单车。

範例: Yes, bikes are still fairly popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. Although many people own cars, cycling is often cheaper and more convenient for short journeys. Some people also use shared bikes to get to work or school.

× Definitely my parents had bought a bike to me when I was a child.

✓ Definitely, my parents bought a bike to me when I was a child.

这里说的是小时候发生的一件过去的事情，没有另一个过去动作作为参照，因此用一般过去时“bought”，不需要用过去完成时“had bought”。

× Definitely my parents had bought a bike to me when I was a child.

✓ Definitely, my parents had bought a bike for me when I was a child.

表达“为某人买某物”时，通常说“buy something for someone”，因此这里应将“to me”改为“for me”。

× That time I use the bike went everywhere I want to go and I feel very happy.

✓ At that time, I used the bike to go everywhere I wanted to go, and I felt very happy.

句子描述的是小时候的经历，属于过去时间，因此“use”“want”和“feel”都应使用一般过去时，分别改为“used”“wanted”和“felt”。

× That time I use the bike went everywhere I want to go and I feel very happy.

✓ At that time, I used the bike to go everywhere I wanted to go, and I felt very happy.

“I use the bike went”把两个动词结构直接连在一起，句子结构不完整。这里可用“used the bike to go...”表达“骑车去……”。

× I very appreciated to my parents.

✓ I really appreciated my parents.

“very”通常不能直接修饰动词“appreciated”。可以用“really”修饰动词，放在动词前，表达“非常感激”。

× I very appreciated to my parents.

✓ I really appreciated my parents.

“appreciate”是及物动词，后面直接接宾语，不需要加介词“to”。因此应说“appreciated my parents”。

× To be honest, bags may be popular many years ago, but no, many people own their own cars and they can draw the cars go everywhere they want, so they don't need old bikes.

✓ To be honest, bags were popular many years ago, but no, many people own their own cars and they can draw the cars go everywhere they want, so they don't need old bikes.

“many years ago”表示过去的时间，因此描述当时的状态应使用一般过去时“were”，而不是“may be”。

× To be honest, bags may be popular many years ago, but no, many people own their own cars and they can draw the cars go everywhere they want, so they don't need old bikes.

✓ To be honest, bags may be popular many years ago, but no, many people own their own cars and can drive them everywhere they want, so they don't need old bikes.

“they can draw the cars go...”中，情态动词“can”后应接动词原形，不能直接把“draw”和“go”这样连用。可改为“can drive them everywhere they want”。注意，“draw”表达的是“画”，如果想表达开车，应使用“drive”。