自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，并统一使用过去时：用“I didn’t have”而不是“I don’t have”。“afraid of learning bicycle”表达不自然，可以说“afraid to learn to ride a bike”。另外，“there’s no chance for me to buy a bike”与前面的原因衔接不够清楚；可说明因为害怕学骑车，所以当时没有买。减少填充词，并用一两个具体细节补充即可。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I was afraid to learn to ride one, so my parents never bought me a bike.

建議: 开头回答明确，但中间有重复和停顿，建议直接说“shared bikes are common in many cities”。注意主谓一致和动词形式，例如“people use bikes”，不要说“people will use bike”。“commute to the destination”不够自然，可改为“commute to work”或“get around the city”。补充一个具体原因，例如共享单车方便、价格实惠。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Shared bikes are easy to find, and people often use them to commute to work or get around the city.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child, uh, because I am afraid of learning, uh, bicycle when I was a child, so there's no chance for me to buy a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, uh, because I was afraid of learning, uh, bicycle when I was a child, so there was no chance for me to buy a bike.

这句话描述的是童年时期的情况，时间背景是过去，因此相关动词应使用过去时：将“don't have”改为“didn't have”，将“am afraid”改为“was afraid”，将“there's”改为“there was”。

× Use bike to commute to the destination.

✓ Use bikes to commute to the destination.

“bike”是可数名词。这里泛指人们用于通勤的自行车，不能单独使用单数形式“bike”；应改为复数“bikes”。