自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本切题，也提到了自行车是父亲送的，但时态和句子结构有明显问题。回忆童年时用过去时，例如“did have”或“rode”；表达“父亲送我自行车”可说“my dad gave me a bike”。另外，“when I was a child”和“teenage birthday”在年龄上不太一致，建议补充具体年龄，并加一个简短细节。

範例: Yes, I did. My dad gave me a bike for my birthday when I was about ten, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

建議: 你尝试说明自行车在国内不太受欢迎，并给出了人们选择汽车和摩托车的原因，但关键词“bikes”被说成了“bag”，而且“is decrease popular”和“choose traffic”表达不自然，影响了理解。建议先直接回答，再用“less popular”或“becoming less popular”描述趋势，并说“choose cars or motorbikes”。可以补充一个具体原因，例如出行更快或距离较远。

範例: I think bikes are becoming less popular in my country. Many people prefer cars or motorbikes because they are more convenient for travelling longer distances.

× Yeah, I have a bike, uh, when I was a child.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child.

这里说的是小时候的情况，时间发生在过去，因此 have 应改为过去式 had。描述过去已经结束的经历时，要使用一般过去时。

× I remember this bike is my dad, uh, for me as my teenage birthday gift.

✓ I remember that my dad gave me this bike as a birthday gift when I was a teenager.

原句中 this bike is my dad for me 的结构无法清楚表达“爸爸把自行车送给我”。可使用“主语 + gave + 人 + 物”的结构表达赠送关系；that 可用于引出 remember 后面的内容。

× in currently the bag is decrease popular in my country

✓ Currently, bikes are becoming less popular in my country.

currently 是副词，表示“目前”，前面不需要加介词 in。句首可直接使用 Currently。

× the bag is decrease popular

✓ Bikes are becoming less popular.

原句在 is 后直接使用 decrease，动词形式不正确。表达正在发生的变化时，可使用“be + 现在分词”，例如 are becoming；表示“越来越不受欢迎”时可说 becoming less popular。

× because many people uh, more like, uh, they choose uh, traffic, uh, car and uh, motor.

✓ because many people prefer cars and motorbikes.

原句中 many people more like 与 they choose 的结构重复且衔接不清。可以直接用 prefer（更喜欢）表达偏好，并使用“主语 + 动词 + 宾语”的完整结构。

× car and motor

✓ cars and motorbikes

这里泛指人们选择的交通工具，不是指某一辆汽车或某一辆摩托车，因此可数名词 car 和 motorbike 应使用复数形式 cars 和 motorbikes。