自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I remember I had my, I had my own bike since I was about 6 before the primary school and I learned it, Uh, I, I spent a whole afternoon learning, learning it with my father and it, it, it was quite difficult at the.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people ride bicycles to commute because it is much more convenient and easier during the rush hour and often umm others cycle regularly for exercise and to keep fit.
評估
總分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 48.0建議: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再按时间顺序补充年龄和学习经历。注意过去经历使用过去时，例如“got”或“learned”；“before the primary school”表达不自然，可说“before I started primary school”。避免重复和填充词，并补完整结尾，例如说明最后是否学会了。
範例: Yes, I had my own bike before I started primary school. I was about six when my father taught me how to ride it. It took us the whole afternoon, and although it was quite difficult at first, I eventually learned.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 74.0建議: 回答切题，也提供了通勤和健身两个具体原因。可以去掉“often umm”等填充词，并避免“convenient and easier”意思重复；“during rush hour”前通常不加“the”。还可以用“while”清楚连接通勤和健身两种情况。
範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people cycle to work because it can be quicker than driving during rush hour. Others ride them for exercise, especially in parks or along rivers at weekends.
文法
× I remember I had my, I had my own bike since I was about 6 before the primary school.
✓ I remember I had my own bike when I was about six, before I started primary school.
“Since”通常表示从过去某个时间开始并持续到现在，通常与现在完成时连用。这里是在回忆童年已经结束的经历，用“when I was about six”表达过去的时间更合适。回答时可使用“when”说明过去发生的时间，避免将“since”与一般过去时“I had”搭配。
× I remember I had my, I had my own bike since I was about 6 before the primary school.
✓ I remember I had my own bike when I was about six, before I started primary school.
泛指上小学这一教育阶段时，通常说“before primary school”，不在“primary school”前加定冠词“the”。如果指某一所特定的小学，才可以使用“the primary school”。
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