自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I did. I have a first buy when I was young, at six years old.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Not that much because umm for the hours. This is not suitable for using the bike. Many people prefer to using their car or the bicycle bikes, modern bicycle.
評估
總分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 55.0建議: ตอบตรงคำถามได้ดีด้วย “Yes, I did” แต่ประโยคถัดไปมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และความหมายไม่ชัด ควรใช้ “I got my first bike when I was six” แทน “I have a first buy” และเพิ่มรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ เช่น สีหรือสถานที่ที่ชอบขี่ เพื่อให้คำตอบเป็นธรรมชาติและเฉพาะเจาะจงขึ้น
範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six. It was a small blue bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 35.0建議: แสดงความเห็นแล้ว แต่เหตุผล “for the hours” และ “not suitable” ยังไม่ชัด และช่วงท้ายมีคำซ้ำกับโครงสร้างที่ผิด ควรระบุเหตุผลให้ชัด เช่น อากาศร้อนหรือการจราจรไม่ปลอดภัย แล้วเปรียบเทียบกับรถยนต์โดยใช้ “prefer driving” หรือ “prefer to drive”
範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. The weather is often hot, and the roads can be busy, so cycling is not always comfortable or safe. As a result, many people prefer to drive.
文法
× I have a first buy when I was young, at six years old.
✓ I first bought a bike when I was six years old.
The question asks about a past experience, so use the simple past verb bought rather than have. Use first bought a bike to express when you got your first bike.
× Not that much because umm for the hours. This is not suitable for using the bike.
✓ Not that much, because the time is not suitable for biking.
The phrase because umm for the hours is incomplete because it does not form a complete clause. State the reason in a complete clause, such as the time is not suitable for biking. The correction assumes that hours refers to the time available.
× Many people prefer to using their car or the bicycle bikes, modern bicycle.
✓ Many people prefer to use their cars or modern bicycles.
After prefer to, use the base form of the verb: use, not using. You can also say prefer using. Use plural nouns to refer generally to the cars and bicycles that many people choose.
× Many people prefer to using their car or the bicycle bikes, modern bicycle.
✓ Many people prefer to use their cars or modern bicycles.
The sentence refers to the choices of many people in general, so plural forms are more appropriate: cars and bicycles. Avoid bicycle bikes because it is redundant; bicycle already refers to a bike.
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