自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer responds directly, but it is too brief to develop the topic, and it needs the article “a” before “child.” Add one relevant detail, such as how you used the bike or where you rode it.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, and I especially enjoyed cycling with my friends.

建議: You give a clear opinion, but the sentence is repetitive and “I see really often when people ride a bike” is unnatural. Use “I often see people riding bikes,” and add a specific reason or example to support your opinion. Remember to pause after “Yes.”

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them to work or school, especially in cities where cycling is a convenient way to avoid traffic.

× When I was child, I had a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

The singular countable noun child needs an article. Use a before child when referring to one child in general.

× Yes in my country bikes are really popular and I see really often when people ride a bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country, and I often see people riding bikes.

In the original sentence, see has no object, so the meaning is incomplete. Add people as the object and use riding bikes to describe what you see. Placing often before see also makes the adverb's meaning clear.