自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question about a bike directly; your response mentions a bag, so it does not address the examiner’s question. If you meant a bike, use the past tense “had” and say whose bike it was. Add one relevant detail, such as when you rode it or where you went.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It belonged to my dad, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

建議: Your opening gives a clear opinion, but correct the subject–verb agreement: “every family has.” The rest is difficult to follow; use the past tense to describe the past, and say “travel a long distance” rather than “go out to our distant way.” Add a clear reason or example to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. In my hometown, many families own at least one bike. In the past, people often rode them when they needed to travel a long distance because they were convenient and affordable.

× Yeah, I have a bag when I was child.

✓ Yeah, I had a bag when I was a child.

The sentence refers to the past, so use the past-tense verb had instead of have. Keep the verb tense consistent with was.

× Yeah, I have a bag when I was child.

✓ Yeah, I had a bag when I was a child.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun child. Say was a child, not was child.

× In my hometown, every family have their own bike.

✓ In my hometown, every family has their own bike.

Every family is grammatically singular, so its verb must be singular: use has rather than have.

× In the past we When need to go out to our distant way, we need to ride back to go our destination.

✓ In the past, when we needed to go out to our distant way, we needed to ride back to go to our destination.

When should introduce the time clause, so place it before its subject and verb: when we needed. Do not repeat we before when. The original also lacks to before our destination; use go to our destination.

× In the past we When need to go out to our distant way, we need to ride back to go our destination.

✓ In the past, when we needed to go out to our distant way, we needed to ride back to go to our destination.

The phrase In the past indicates a past-time situation. Use needed rather than need for both verbs to maintain the past tense.