自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接用过去时回答：可以说“Yes, I did.”，不要用现在完成时“Yes, I have”。接着补充一两个具体细节，例如骑车的地点、频率或你喜欢骑车的原因。注意用句号或连接词把想法分开，避免把多个短语连在一起。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood. I loved it because it made me feel independent.

建議: 先明确回答“Bikes are quite popular”，然后用一个清晰的原因支持观点。这里可以说交通拥堵时骑自行车有助于避开堵车；“traffic”指交通状况，不要用“trafficker”。避免重复使用“because”，并确保句子完整、意思清楚。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They are a convenient way to get around, especially during rush hour when the roads are often congested. They are also inexpensive and good for the environment.

× Yes I have because I think it is cool I really like it

✓ Yes, I did because I thought it was cool. I really liked it.

问题问的是“小时候有没有自行车”，使用一般过去时。回答应使用“Yes, I did”，而不是现在完成时“Yes, I have”。描述小时候的想法和喜好时，也应将“think”和“like”改为过去式“thought”和“liked”；与过去的想法相对应，“is”应改为“was”。

× Yes I do because bikes can let us go somewhere quickly because sometimes the trafficker will We all heavy.

✓ Yes, I do because bikes can let us go somewhere quickly because sometimes the trafficker will be heavy.

情态动词“will”后面应接动词原形。这里需要用原形“be”连接主语和形容词“heavy”，不能直接说“will ... heavy”。