自行车— Part 1 評分報告

練習Part12026-10-22 19:10:21

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Part 1

考官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

考生

No, I don't have

考官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

考生

Yes, my school helps lots of students go to school by bike

評估

總分

總分: 5.0流暢度與連貫性: 5.0發音: 5.0文法: 5.0詞彙: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

分數: 25.0

建議: 回答没有直接说清楚,而且“don't have”使用了现在时,与“when you were a child”这个过去时间不一致。先用过去时直接回答,例如“No, I didn’t”,再补充一个具体原因或细节。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was safer for me to walk to school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

分數: 45.0

建議: 回答提到了学生骑车上学,但没有充分说明自行车在整个国家是否普及。“my school helps”表达不自然,也不能很好地支持这个观点。先直接回答,再说明骑车现象或原因;可将表达改为“many students at my school cycle to school”。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many students at my school cycle to school because it’s convenient and inexpensive.

文法

Past tense issue

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

问题类型:5(过去时错误)。问题询问的是“小时候有没有自行车”,使用过去时“Did you have...?”,回答也应使用过去时。这里应将“don't”改为“didn't”;补上“one”可明确指代前面提到的自行车。

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