自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and use the past tense because you are talking about childhood. The phrase “from a tricycle” is unclear, and “pull me through the bicycle” is not a natural expression. Explain briefly how you learned to ride and who helped you; keep the answer to two or three clear sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. My dad taught me how to ride it, and he held the back of the bike until I could balance on my own.

建議: Give a direct answer, then support it with a specific reason or example. Use “these days” instead of “in this generation,” and make sure the verb is complete: say “people go,” not “people going.” Avoid claiming that people cycle most of the time unless that is accurate; you could mention exercise or commuting instead.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. These days, many people cycle for exercise or to avoid traffic, and bike-sharing services make it easy to get around.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child from a tricycle and my dad who gave me a lesson on how to ride a bike and then slowly pull me through the bicycle

✓ Yes, I had a tricycle when I was a child. My dad taught me how to ride a bike and then slowly pushed me along on it.

The question asks about childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had instead of have, and pushed instead of pull. Keep the other past-tense verbs consistent as well.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child from a tricycle and my dad who gave me a lesson on how to ride a bike and then slowly pull me through the bicycle

✓ Yes, I had a tricycle when I was a child. My dad taught me how to ride a bike and then slowly pushed me along on it.

The original answer combines several ideas in one sentence, making the relationship between the tricycle, the lesson, and the action unclear. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and make the subject of each action clear.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child from a tricycle and my dad who gave me a lesson on how to ride a bike and then slowly pull me through the bicycle

✓ Yes, I had a tricycle when I was a child. My dad taught me how to ride a bike and then slowly pushed me along on it.

Through the bicycle is not the appropriate phrase for describing someone helping a child ride. Along on it clearly expresses that the child was moving on the bike. Use prepositions that describe the intended direction or position.

× So probably people going out by bike most of the time.

✓ So people probably go out by bike most of the time.

The original sentence uses going without an auxiliary verb, so it does not have a complete finite verb. Use the simple present go to make a complete statement about what people generally do.