自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了问题，也提到了自行车的颜色和与姐姐共用自行车的经历，但第二句“It was a blue one before that”意思不清楚，和后面“借自行车”的内容也有些矛盾。注意统一时态：描述童年经历时用过去时，例如“borrowed”和“got”。可以按“直接回答—补充颜色或经历—说明感受”的顺序组织答案，并用具体细节替代含糊表达。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child. Before my family bought one, my sister and I used to borrow a bike from a neighbor, so we were really excited to have our own.

建議: 回答切题，理由具体，也使用了“especially”和“because”来展开。不过，“which is useful and in crowded cities”表达不自然，可改为“which is especially useful in crowded cities”；“bike parking facility”应使用复数“bike parking facilities”或更自然的“bike racks”。注意标点和搭配，并保持句子清晰。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially with students and commuters. They’re affordable and convenient for short journeys, and they’re easy to park, which is especially helpful in crowded cities. Many schools also provide bike racks for students.

× My sister and I often borrow a little bike from our neighborhood, so we were all happy when we own one.

✓ My sister and I often borrowed a little bike from our neighborhood, so we were all happy when we owned one.

这句话描述的是童年时期发生的事情，因此动词应使用过去时。将 borrow 改为 borrowed；when 引导的时间从句也需要与过去语境一致，将 own 改为 owned。

× They're also easy to park, which is useful and in crowded cities, and many schools have bike parking facility.

✓ They're also easy to park, which is useful in crowded cities, and many schools have bike parking facility.

which is useful 后面直接接地点状语 in crowded cities 即可。and 连接的内容在这里结构不匹配，应删除，以避免多余且不恰当的连词。

× They're also easy to park, which is useful and in crowded cities, and many schools have bike parking facility.

✓ They're also easy to park, which is useful and in crowded cities, and many schools have a bike parking facility.

facility 是可数名词单数，前面需要限定词。此处可加不定冠词 a，改为 a bike parking facility。