自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答是否小时候有自行车，并统一使用过去时。注意表达自然度：可说“my mom bought it for me”“a small, beautiful pink bike”和“after about three weeks of practice”。最后一句的“After I exercise... I will ride”时态和意思不清，建议说明练习后学会了骑车。控制在三至四句，并补充一个具体感受或回忆。

範例: Yes, I did. My mom bought me a small pink bike when I was eight, and she taught me how to ride it. After about three weeks of practice, I was able to ride it on my own. I was really proud of myself.

建議: 观点明确，但整句过长，建议拆成两至三句，并用“because”或“for example”连接理由。注意主谓一致和词语搭配：用“public bikes/bicycles”“on both sides of the street”和“a way to commute”，而不是“some public bicycle”“in the two sides”或“a commute tools”。可以补充一个具体场景，例如通勤者用共享单车去上班或上学。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. You can often see public bikes parked along the streets, and many people use them to commute to work or school. They’re convenient for short journeys and help people avoid traffic.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题询问的是你小时候“有没有”自行车，时间在过去，因此回答应使用过去时。把 have 改为 had。回答过去经历时，注意让动词时态与问题中的过去时间保持一致。

× It's a very beautiful pink small bike

✓ It was a very beautiful small pink bike.

这里描述的是小时候的自行车，应使用过去时 was，而不是现在时 is。注意叙述过去的经历时，相关动词也应保持过去时。

× It's a very beautiful pink small bike

✓ It was a very beautiful small pink bike.

英语中多个形容词通常按“观点或评价—大小—颜色”的顺序排列。因此，应先说 small，再说 pink。可以记住常见顺序：观点、大小、颜色、名词。

× After I exercise about 3 weeks, I will ride a bike.

✓ After I practiced for about three weeks, I could ride a bike.

这句话讲的是小时候学骑车的经历，应使用过去时。practiced 和 could 与过去叙述相符。讲述已经发生的经历时，避免使用现在时 exercise 或表示将来的 will。

× After I exercise about 3 weeks, I will ride a bike.

✓ After I practiced for about three weeks, I could ride a bike.

表示某个动作持续了多长时间时，通常要在时间长度前加 for，例如 for about three weeks。建议记住结构：for + 一段时间。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country when you walk on the street and you will see some public bicycle in the two sides of the street and a lot of people would choose it as a commute tools to go to work or go to school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. When you walk on the street, you will see some public bicycles on both sides of the street, and a lot of people would choose them as commuting tools to go to work or school.

some 后面应接可数名词复数，因此 bicycle 应改为 bicycles。另外，tools 是复数，前面的冠词 a 不能与复数名词搭配；这里改为 commuting tools。注意检查限定词、名词单复数以及它们之间的一致性。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country when you walk on the street and you will see some public bicycle in the two sides of the street and a lot of people would choose it as a commute tools to go to work or go to school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. When you walk on the street, you will see some public bicycles on both sides of the street, and a lot of people would choose them as commuting tools to go to work or school.

表示物体位于街道两侧时，通常说 on both sides of the street，而不是 in the two sides of the street。建议记住固定搭配 on both sides of。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country when you walk on the street and you will see some public bicycle in the two sides of the street and a lot of people would choose it as a commute tools to go to work or go to school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. When you walk on the street, you will see some public bicycles on both sides of the street, and a lot of people would choose them as commuting tools to go to work or school.

it 指代单数事物，但这里指的是复数的公共自行车 bicycles，因此应改为 them。使用代词时，要确保代词的单复数与它所指代的名词一致。