自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再补充一个具体细节。注意应说“when I was little”，不能说“when I was a little”；“As my favorite ride”是句子片段，可以改成完整句，例如说明自行车为什么是你最喜欢的交通工具。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was little, and it was my favorite way to get around. I often rode it with my friends after school.

建議: 开头的时间表达不自然，可用“Five years ago”；谈过去时用“they weren’t”，谈现在时用“they’re”。避免使用“Hm”，并注意名词复数和发音：这里应说“bikes”，不是“back”。建议用“especially in Shanghai”引出具体地点，再补充骑车受欢迎的原因或场景。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in Shanghai. You can see many people cycling on the streets, particularly during rush hour. Compared with five years ago, cycling seems more common now because it’s convenient and environmentally friendly.

× I had a bike when I was a little.

✓ I had a bike when I was little.

表示“小时候”时，little 作形容词使用，不需要在前面加冠词 a。可以说“when I was little”，也可以说“when I was a little child”。

× As my favorite ride.

✓ It was my favorite ride.

原句没有谓语动词，因此是句子片段。可补上主语和谓语，改为“It was my favorite ride.”，表达“它是我最喜欢的骑行工具”。

× After five years ago, I think it was not but Hm now I think it's very popular in my country, especially Shanghai, you can see a lot of back on the street.

✓ Five years ago, I think bikes were not very popular, but now I think they're very popular in my country. In Shanghai especially, you can see a lot of bikes on the streets.

“five years ago”表示“在五年前”，前面不应加 after。另外，“尤其是在上海”应说“especially in Shanghai”或“In Shanghai especially”，地点前需要介词 in。

× I think it was not

✓ I think bikes were not very popular

这里谈论的是复数的 bikes，不能用单数代词 it 指代。应使用 bikes，或用复数代词 they；与复数主语搭配时，be 动词也应使用 were。

× You can see a lot of back on the street.

✓ You can see a lot of bikes on the streets.

根据上下文，学生想表达街上有很多自行车。a lot of 后接可数名词复数，因此应使用 bikes，而不是 back。

× ...it's very popular in my country, especially Shanghai, you can see a lot of back on the street.

✓ ...they're very popular in my country. In Shanghai especially, you can see a lot of bikes on the streets.

原句用逗号直接连接两个完整句子，造成句子结构不当。可以用句号分开，并将“尤其是在上海”放到后一个句子中。