自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你直接回答了问题，也补充了自行车的颜色和来源，但有明显的用词和语法错误：“back”应为“bike”，“I were”应为“I was”，“which one”在这里不自然。可以用两句话说明你有自行车，再补充是谁买的或你如何使用它。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a red bike that my dad bought for me when I was a child, and I used to ride it around our neighbourhood.

建議: 你表达了“自行车很受欢迎”的观点，也尝试给出原因，但“back”应为“bikes”；“it became a sport”不能清楚说明自行车为什么受欢迎；“exercise my body”不够地道。建议给出更具体的理由，例如通勤、健身或骑行运动，并用“because”连接观点和理由。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise, and some also use them to get to work or school because they’re convenient and affordable.

× Yeah, of course, I had a red bike when I were a child, which one my dad bought for me.

✓ Yeah, of course, I had a red bike when I was a child, which my dad bought for me.

主语是第一人称单数“I”，过去时的be动词应使用“was”，不能用“were”。另外，“which one”在这里多余；用“which”引导非限制性定语从句即可。

× Yeah, of course, I had a red bike when I were a child, which one my dad bought for me.

✓ Yeah, of course, I had a red bike when I was a child, which my dad bought for me.

“which”已经指代前面的“a red bike”，因此不需要再加“one”。使用“which my dad bought for me”即可表达“这是我爸爸给我买的”。

× Yeah, I think back is so popular in my country because, uh, I think it became a sport and we can use it to exercise my body.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are so popular in my country because, uh, I think they have become a sport, and we can use them to exercise our bodies.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，通常用复数“bikes”；相应的动词和代词也应使用复数形式“are”和“they/them”。

× Yeah, I think back is so popular in my country because, uh, I think it became a sport and we can use it to exercise my body.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are so popular in my country because, uh, I think they have become a sport, and we can use them to exercise our bodies.

句子的主语是“we”，所以后面的身体应与主语保持一致，用“our bodies”，而不是“my body”。此外，若用复数“bikes”作指代，应使用“they/them”，不能用“it”。