自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamanız ve bisikletinizin renkleri ile sepetinden bahsetmeniz iyi. Ancak geçmişteki bir bisikleti anlatırken geçmiş zaman kullanın; “beginner type bicycle” ve “behind the own self” doğal ifadeler değil. “A beginner’s bike” ve “a basket at the back” gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. Renkleri ve sepeti ayrı, kısa cümlelerle anlatın.

範例: Yes, I had a beginner’s bike when I was a child. It was blue and white, and it had a small basket at the back.

建議: “Yes” diyerek görüşünüzü belirtmişsiniz; ancak “everyone” ve “effective for everything” ifadeleri çok genelleyici ve belirsiz. Bisikletlerin hangi amaçlarla kullanıldığını daha doğal biçimde açıklayın: işe veya okula gitmek, egzersiz yapmak gibi. “Bikes” çoğul olduğu için devamında “they” kullanın ve bir bağlaçla fikirlerinizi düzenleyin.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to work or school, while others ride them for exercise. They’re also a convenient way to travel short distances.

× Yes, I had a bike. It's like beginner type bicycle and it has two colors blue and white and it has also baskets behind the own self.

✓ Yes, I had a bike. It was a beginner-type bicycle, and it had two colors, blue and white. It also had baskets at the back.

The answer describes a bike the student had as a child, so the description should use the past tense. Change 'It's' to 'It was' and 'has' to 'had' to keep the tense consistent.

× It's like beginner type bicycle

✓ It was a beginner-type bicycle

The singular countable noun 'bicycle' needs an article. Use 'a' before 'beginner-type bicycle'. The hyphen also joins 'beginner-type' as a compound modifier.

× baskets behind the own self

✓ baskets at the back

'The own self' is not a correct reflexive pronoun phrase in this context. Use a location phrase such as 'at the back' to describe where the baskets were.

× Yes, everyone uses the bikes for their routes for office or something else and also everyone uses it for the sports and it's effective for everything.

✓ Yes, everyone uses bikes for their routes to the office or other places, and they also use them for sports. Bikes are useful for many things.

When speaking generally about bikes and sports, do not use the definite article 'the'. Say 'uses bikes' and 'for sports', not 'uses the bikes' and 'for the sports'.

× their routes for office

✓ their routes to the office

Use 'to' to indicate the destination of a route. Also, 'office' normally takes the definite article here, so say 'to the office'.

× everyone uses it for the sports

✓ everyone uses them for sports

The pronoun refers to 'bikes', which is plural, so use 'them' rather than 'it'. The same plural reference is maintained in the corrected answer.