自行车— Part 1 評分報告

練習Part12026-10-22 12:07:20

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Part 1

考官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

考生

Yes I have, I remember arrived in Mexico Banana tribe.

考官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

考生

Now, what I see is the mobile motorbike is more popular.

評估

總分

總分: 5.0流暢度與連貫性: 5.0發音: 5.0文法: 5.0詞彙: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

分數: 20.0

建議: 回答基本方向是肯定的,但要用过去时回答童年经历:用“Yes, I did”,而不是“Yes, I have”。后半句语法和意思不清楚,建议删去无法准确表达的内容,补充一个具体回忆,例如自行车的颜色、在哪里骑,或谁教你骑车。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

分數: 35.0

建議: 先直接回答自行车在你国家是否流行,再解释你的观察。句中的“mobile motorbike”不自然;如果你想表达摩托车更受欢迎,可以说“motorcycles are more popular than bicycles”。最好补充一个具体原因或例子,并注意不要把自行车和摩托车混为一谈。

範例: I don’t think bicycles are as popular as motorcycles in my country. Many people prefer motorcycles because they are faster and convenient for commuting. However, bicycles are still common in parks and some city centers.

文法

Past tense issue

× Yes I have, I remember arrived in Mexico Banana tribe.

✓ Yes, I did. I remember arriving in Mexico Banana tribe.

问题类型 ID:5(过去时错误)。问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车,使用一般过去时,因此回答应为“Yes, I did”,而不是“Yes, I have”。回答过去的经历时也可以使用“remember arriving”。

Verb + -ing form

× Yes I have, I remember arrived in Mexico Banana tribe.

✓ Yes, I did. I remember arriving in Mexico Banana tribe.

问题类型 ID:8(动词后接 -ing 形式)。表示“记得曾经做过某事”时,remember 后接动名词,因此应将“arrived”改为“arriving”。

重點詞彙

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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