自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你没有回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题；同时，“when you're child”语法不正确，应说“when you were a child”。先直接回答“是”或“不是”，再补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的样子、骑车的地点或你的感受。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建議: 你表达了自行车受欢迎这一观点，但句子结构不自然。“Bikes are popular”比“it's popular the bike”更准确；泛指人群时通常说“People”，不加“The”。“around the garden”可能不够贴切，可以说明人们在哪里骑车、为什么骑，或举出具体例子。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. People often ride them in parks or along riverside paths because cycling is a convenient way to get around and stay active.

× Did you have a bike when you're child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

问题发生在过去，when 引导的时间从句也应使用过去时。应将 you're（you are）改为 were。

× Did you have a bike when you're child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

child 是可数名词单数，前面通常需要冠词。这里应使用不定冠词 a，表达“一个孩子”。

× Yes, in my country it's popular the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

原句中 it's popular the bike 的语序不正确。表达“自行车很受欢迎”时，可以让 bikes 作主语，并将 are popular 放在主语之后。

× Yes, in my country it's popular the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

这里是在泛指自行车这种交通工具，应使用复数 bikes，而不是单数 the bike。泛指复数名词时通常不加 the。

× The people like riding the bike around the garden.

✓ People like riding bikes around the garden.

这里泛指人们和自行车，应使用 people 和 bikes，不需要用 the 来特指某些人或某一辆自行车。