自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabın əsas fikri aydındır, amma bəzi sözlər düzgün seçilmədiyi üçün məna qarışır: “break” əvəzinə “bike”, “three veils” əvəzinə “three wheels”, “both to me” əvəzinə “bought it for me” işlət. Yaşı “when I was four” kimi ifadə et. Fikri yarımçıq saxlamadan, velosiped haqqında bir konkret xatirə və ya səbəb əlavə et.

範例: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a small red bike with three wheels when I was four. I loved riding it around our garden because it was fun and helped me feel independent.

建議: Birbaşa cavab ver, sonra velosipedlərin kimlər arasında və hansı məqsədlə istifadə olunduğunu aydın izah et. “I just meet with bugs on children” ifadəsi başa düşülmür; nəzərdə tutduğun fikri daha dəqiq sözlərlə ifadə et. “People use them to avoid traffic and stay healthy” formasından istifadə et. Uşaqlar və böyüklər barədə müqayisəni də qısa və məntiqli qur.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many adults also ride them to avoid traffic or get some exercise. However, cycling is more common in parks and quieter neighbourhoods than on busy roads.

× ...and it's both to me by my dad when I was a four years old.

✓ ...and it was bought for me by my dad when I was four years old.

Use the plural form years after four, but do not use the article a before an age expressed with four years old. The passive verb phrase was bought is also appropriate because the bike was given to the speaker.

× I liked it because it's so enjoyable for me.

✓ I liked it because it was very enjoyable for me.

The answer describes a childhood experience in the past, so use was rather than the present-tense form is. Keep the verb tense consistent with I liked.

× ...especially among the children, not adults...

✓ ...especially among children, not adults...

When referring generally to children and adults as groups, do not use the definite article the.

× But also some people use it for avoiding traffic...

✓ But some people also use them to avoid traffic...

The pronoun refers to bikes, which is plural, so use them rather than it. Use the infinitive to avoid to express the purpose of using bikes.

× ...and to be healthier using.

✓ ...and to be healthier.

The original ending does not form a complete, grammatical phrase. Keep the purpose phrase parallel: people use bikes to avoid traffic and to be healthier.