自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Исправьте время: вопрос о прошлом, поэтому используйте “did you have” или “I had”, а не “I have”. Также произносите и пишите “bikes”, а не “bites”. Ответьте прямо и добавьте одну конкретную деталь, например, где вы катались или сколько вам было лет.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighbourhood after school.

建議: Ответьте прямо, используя обобщённое множественное число без артикля: “bikes are popular”. Уберите повтор “the” и замените неестественное “everybody ... has some bikes” на более естественное описание того, кто и как использует велосипеды. Добавьте конкретную причину или пример, сохраняя ответ кратким.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people, including adults, ride them to work or use them for exercise, especially when the weather is nice.

× Yeah, I have a few bites when I was a child.

✓ Yeah, I had a few bikes when I was a child.

Because the sentence describes a past situation, use the simple past had instead of the present have. Bikes is also the contextually appropriate word, since the question is about bicycles.

× Yeah, I think the bikes are really popular in my country because everybody, even the the adults, has some bikes.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are really popular in my country because everybody, even adults, has some bikes.

When referring to bikes and adults in general, use plural nouns without the definite article the. The repeated the before adults is also unnecessary. Everybody is grammatically singular, so has is correct.