自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You answer the question directly and give a relevant personal detail. To sound more natural, say that your father gave you the bike to help you learn to ride, rather than “a gift ... for me to learn.” Also, a bike is not a “moment,” so describe the experience or memory as special. You could add one specific detail, such as the bike’s colour or where you learned to ride.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me to help me learn how to ride, and I remember being really excited. It was bright red, and I used to practise in the park near our house.

建議: You give a clear answer, but “almost every child” may be too broad, and “gets it” does not clearly refer to bikes. Use “many children get a bike” and keep the tense consistent with “they can.” The phrase “make their life easy” is vague; explain how bikes are useful, for example, for short trips or commuting. Linking your supporting detail with “because” or “for example” would also improve coherence.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many parents buy their children a bike so they can learn to ride and become more independent. Bikes are also useful for short trips because they are affordable and easy to park.

× Almost every child gets it from their parents so that they could learn to ride and to make their life easy.

✓ Almost every child gets a bike from their parents so that they can learn to ride and make their life easier.

The sentence describes a general situation in the present, so can is more appropriate than could, which commonly refers to past ability or a hypothetical possibility. The phrase make their life easier is also the more natural expression in this context. Use can for a present or general ability.