自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly, then explain briefly why you did not ride the bike much and what changed later. Keep the timeline clear: use the past tense for childhood (“had,” “was”) and say “started to enjoy riding,” not “started to liking.” Avoid fillers and repeated phrases such as “when I” and “you know.” Use a natural expression such as “exploring different places” instead of “viewing different views.”

範例: Yes, I had a bike as a child, but I rarely rode it because I was afraid of falling. When I was around fifteen, I became more confident and started enjoying cycling. I liked exploring different places on my bike.

建議: Give a direct answer and support it with one clear observation or reason. Avoid repeating “a lot” and “just,” and use “cyclists” or “people riding bikes” rather than “bikers” if you mean people cycling. You could also make your observation more specific by mentioning when or where you see them. Use “bikes” consistently instead of switching between singular and plural forms.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see many people cycling to work or school, especially in the morning. They are a convenient way to get around, particularly in busy areas.

× When I was a child I have a bike but I don't usually use it because I'm scared.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike, but I didn't usually use it because I was scared.

The speaker is describing a period in the past, so the verbs should also be in the past tense: have becomes had, don't use becomes didn't use, and am becomes was. Keep the tense consistent when describing past events.

× I started to liking riding a bike.

✓ I started liking riding a bike.

After start, you can use either the -ing form or to + the base form of a verb. Use started liking or started to like, not started to liking.

× There's a lot of bikers riding their own bike.

✓ There are a lot of bikers riding their own bikes.

Use there are with the plural noun phrase a lot of bikers. There is or there's is used with a singular noun phrase. For example, say There are a lot of bikers, but There is a biker.

× There's a lot of bikers riding their own bike.

✓ There are a lot of bikers riding their own bikes.

Bikers refers to more than one person, so the possessive phrase should also refer to more than one bike: their own bikes. Match the noun's number to the meaning you intend.