自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接用过去时回答：用“Yes, I did”，而不是“Yes, I do”。描述童年经历时统一使用过去时，例如“had”“bought”“could ride”。避免重复表达“a bicycle ... that ... bought it”，可改为“a bike that my father bought me”。最后补充一个具体细节，比如你通常在哪里骑车或骑车时的感受；“It was a lot of fun”比“It’s very fun”更自然。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike that my father bought me when I was about seven. I used to ride it around our neighbourhood after school, and I really enjoyed it.

建議: 回答切题，也提供了共享单车这一相关例子。注意复数和搭配：说“in bigger cities”，并可用“bike-sharing schemes”或“bike-sharing services”。删去重复的“We can”，把“use a little money”改为更自然的“pay a small fee”。还可以简要说明共享单车受欢迎的原因，例如方便、价格低或适合短途出行。

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in larger cities. Bike-sharing services are widely used because they’re convenient and affordable. People can rent a bike for a small fee and use it to travel short distances around the city.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题是在回答关于童年的过去经历时使用了现在时 do。问句使用一般过去时 did，因此回答也应使用 did。

× I have a bicycle when I was a child that uh, my father bought it for me and I can, I could ride this bike around our house.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was a child that my father bought for me, and I could ride this bike around our house.

这里描述的是童年时期的情况，应使用一般过去时 had，而不是现在时 have。描述过去的骑车能力应使用 could。关系从句中 that 已经代替 bicycle 作 bought 的宾语，因此不应再加 it。

× It's very fun.

✓ It was very fun.

这句话是在描述小时候骑车的感受，属于过去的经历，因此应将 is 改为过去式 was。

× Yeah, bikes are popular in our country and in bigger city the bike sharing schemes are very popular.

✓ Yeah, bikes are popular in our country, and in bigger cities the bike-sharing schemes are very popular.

这里泛指较大的城市，city 应使用复数 cities。以辅音字母加 y 结尾的名词变复数时，需将 y 改为 ies。