自行车— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I did. My dad bought me a bike when I was a child and I practised for a few days before I could ride it quite easily and after that I was quite into riding bicycle. Until I grew up I don't have much time to ride a bike.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because bus lanes are not widely found in many areas. So it's quite dangerous to drive two ride bicycle in Bangkok.
評估
總分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 65.0建議: ตอบตรงคำถามได้ดีและมีรายละเอียดเกี่ยวกับการฝึกขี่จักรยาน แต่ประโยคยาวและเชื่อมหลายความคิดเข้าด้วยกัน ควรแบ่งเป็นประโยคสั้น ๆ ใช้คำว่า “ride a bike” แทน “ride bicycle” และปรับ tense ให้สอดคล้องกับอดีต เช่น “After I grew up, I didn’t have much time…”
範例: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a bike when I was a child, and I practised for a few days before I could ride it confidently. I really enjoyed cycling, but I had less time for it as I got older.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 62.0建議: แสดงความคิดเห็นและให้เหตุผลได้ แต่ควรใช้คำให้ตรงบริบท โดยพูดถึง “bike lanes” หรือ “cycling lanes” แทน “bus lanes” และแก้ “drive two ride bicycle” เป็น “ride a bike”. อาจเพิ่มรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ ว่าการจราจรหนาแน่นทำให้การปั่นจักรยานไม่ปลอดภัย
範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Thailand, especially in Bangkok. There aren’t many dedicated bike lanes, and the heavy traffic can make cycling feel dangerous. As a result, many people prefer to travel by car or public transport.
文法
× I was quite into riding bicycle.
✓ I was quite into riding a bicycle.
The singular countable noun bicycle needs an article. Use a before bicycle when referring to any bicycle in general.
× Until I grew up I don't have much time to ride a bike.
✓ After I grew up, I didn't have much time to ride a bike.
The sentence describes a past period, so use the past-tense form didn't have rather than the present-tense form don't have. After is clearer than until here because the intended meaning is that the student had little time once they had grown up.
× So it's quite dangerous to drive two ride bicycle in Bangkok.
✓ So it's quite dangerous to ride a bicycle in Bangkok.
The singular countable noun bicycle needs the article a. In this context, ride a bicycle is also the appropriate phrase; two does not fit the sentence.
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